Poetry Critique's appreciated.?

This brought a smile to my face. I think the first and second stanzas were BEAUTIFUL and breathtaking(: I love your choice of words, the way you said it was like i could feel your emotions and i was the one in the poem. One thing i have to say though is that the second last stanza, near the end i was kind of lost..i wasn't exactly sure what was going on? Maybe you could make that a bit clearer, unless you want to be confusing..than that's ok too(: Most people who talk about love, write in such cliche ways, i love how you told the story of that innocent time, where you get erflies and are always happy, before you get too serious.This poem was extremely refreshing and it spoke to me alot, and i'm sure it will speak to others too. I think you should seriously think about getting this published ! I really really enjoyed this poem, you have no idea! Keep writing, im looking forward to reading more of your poems. I'm speechless(: Good luck!